Advert first ideas/draft without picture

Dolby

There are some nice ideas here Kerris. To get around the fact that you don't have a male star in this, is there any way you could maybe have her with a picture in a frame of him? This could break it up too? Also, maybe make more of the 'whirlpool lyrics' with a zoom or something?

Mrs D

The mes and main star are effective. You have some very good shots of the swans. Well done. The camera control is a little clunky - this is a key element of level 3 and 4. I know that there are more shots to come, but it does feel a bit too repetitive at the moment. This might change when more footage is edited in, but you may have to film more shots.

Draft

Progress

This is one shot from my video, however the whole video did not upload successfully on this attempt, the draft will follow.

Filming Progress

I am currently editing, I have made a few changed where the shots last too long and become a little tedius. I will be posting a rough cut shortly.

Filming Progress

I have filmed the main parts of my video so far. During filming i managed to capture extra naturalistic shots which could be useful to use in my video if I find i have gaps to fill that I was unaware of when planning.
I am happy with the way in which my filming went and feel I have some successful shots to use within the video. I still have the dancing shots to film however so hopefully these will go as well as the rest have.

Feedback from Fonts

It seems that the second font is a favourite amongst the comments I received however the third and eleventh ones down were also favourites.

I came accross the issue that the source I had sampled the fonts from would not allow me to type in those fonts and therefore had to find one as similar as possible on the available programme. These were therefore fonts that I then sampled....


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Mrs D

You have some nice ideas regarding fonts. Try them with the colours as this may change people's mind. Do some reflection regarding your feedback.

Colours

Font for Digipak title

I need to get some feedback on these fonts to help me narrow them down and decide which is most appropriate for my Digipak.

Dolby

Make that reflection more detailed- what exactly do you need to add?